As I woke-up with my head dangling on the side of my bed, I heard my Mum ''Roaring'' across the hall-way ''Sione GET UP YOU HAVE SCHOOL TODAY'' as I draged myself out of bed to go wash my face and brush my teeth, looking outside to check the weather, I said to myself ''It's going to be a really hot day today'' as I entered my bathroom half a sleep I dipped my face in freezing water then I was wide-awake.
Later after that I walked into the kitchen smelling pancakes almost thinking I was in a pancake shop I dashed to the plate cupboard and then zoomed to the oven for some pancakes I chomped and munched on each pancake it was like heaven on earth soon after that I packed my lunch.
Eventually we Jumped in the car and hit the road on the way to school, once I arrived to school and seeing all my friends.
3 comments:
Hi Sione,
It's your sister here, I think you've done a great job with your story but it would've been better if I was in the story don't you think. Well that's it for me now I wish you have a great day.KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!
Yours Faithfully,
Sylvia
Hey Sione,
My name is Kristan Steele. I am a student at The University of South Alabama. I have enjoyed reading your blog posts. I really like this one because of the verbs you chose to use; "zoomed" and "dashed" were great choices! I like "chomped" too! You also used a great simile, "each pancake was like heaven on earth." I can just picture how amazing they were! I think I will have some pancakes for dinner now. Keep up the wonderful work, Sione!
Respectfully,
Kristan Steele
Hey Sione!
My name is Rebecca and I am a student at the University of South Alabama. I enjoyed reading your post about your "Usual Mornings". They sound a lot like mine when I was at your age! I thought it was very well written and you used great descriptive words throughout the entire post. Keep up the great work!
Rebecca
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